Us two, twisted, into each other
Someone shouts, as we get ready to fly
With wings of hope we soar and fall
Her hair brush my face, time crawls
The amber sun glows like a burning coin
Freefalling, carefree we two are joined
Now we are frozen stiff like timber
Soon, our soul shall decant these earthly vessels
We'll chase the wind through day and night
And together taste immortality, entwined
By Nothingman from Poetry
Thank you for taking part in our Jigsaw Poem Challenge. When the Jigsaw Poem Challenge poems are all posted, I will then post the Add- a - line group poem and after that the August Poet's Who Blog Poetry Collective.
Wednesday, August 20, 2008
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3 comments:
"The amber sun glows like aburning coin" -- a great line. I like this a lot.
great post, as usual. have a nice day, write poetry!
more "add a line" poems, please :)
Goes down like a fine wine! Great.
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