Sunday, August 03, 2008

Add a line Poem

Add the next line in the comments. I will end by adding the last line at the point I deem it to be done.


Fast and furious, I chase



First line by Sara from The Shores of My Dreams.

12 comments:

The Mad Dog said...

my dark dreams across the sky

Anonymous said...

as the blackbirds circle and cry

lissa said...

Fast and furious, I chase
my dark dreams across the sky
as the blackbirds circle and cry
longings of an abandon heart

Jenn: said...

Fast and furious, I chase
my dark dreams across the sky
as the blackbirds circle and cry
longings of an abandon heart
fill the void that keeps us apart

Raven's Wing Poetry said...

Fast and furious, I chase
my dark dreams across the sky
as the blackbirds circle and cry
longings of an abandon heart
fill the void that keeps us apart
broken, we are unspoken and chokin'

Ralph Murre said...

Fast and furious, I chase
my dark dreams across the sky
as the blackbirds circle and cry
longings of an abandon heart
fill the void that keeps us apart
broken, we are unspoken and chokin'
no token of your esteem for me

Beatrice V said...

Fast and furious, I chase
my dark dreams across the sky
as the blackbirds circle and cry
longings of an abandoned heart
fill the void that keeps us apart
broken, we are unspoken and chokin'
no token of your esteem for me;
but ghosts in a Chinese shadow-play.

Anonymous said...

Fast and furious, I chase
my dark dreams across the sky
as the blackbirds circle and cry
longings of an abandoned heart
fill the void that keeps us apart
broken, we are unspoken and chokin'
no token of your esteem for me;
but ghosts in a Chinese shadow-play.
Vast and curious, I still chase

Anonymous said...

Fast and furious, I chase
my dark dreams across the sky
as the blackbirds circle and cry
longings of an abandoned heart
fill the void that keeps us apart
broken, we are unspoken and chokin'
no token of your esteem for me;
but ghosts in a Chinese shadow-play.
Vast and curious, I still chase
your dark truths amid the lies

Anonymous said...

Fast and furious, I chase
my dark dreams across the sky
as the blackbirds circle and cry
longings of an abandoned heart
fill the void that keeps us apart
broken, we are unspoken and chokin'
no token of your esteem for me;
but ghosts in a Chinese shadow-play.
Vast and curious, I still chase
your dark truths amid the lies
that bury us on the eastern plain

Anonymous said...

Fast and furious, I chase
my dark dreams across the sky
as the blackbirds circle and cry
longings of an abandoned heart
fill the void that keeps us apart
broken, we are unspoken and chokin'
no token of your esteem for me;
but ghosts in a Chinese shadow-play.
Vast and curious, I still chase
your dark truths amid the lies
that bury us on the eastern plain
barren our kabuki died in vain

Davidlind said...

Fast and furious, I chase
my dark dreams across the sky
as the blackbirds circle and cry
longings of an abandoned heart
fill the void that keeps us apart
broken, we are unspoken and chokin'
no token of your esteem for me;
but ghosts in a Chinese shadow-play.
Vast and curious, I still chase
your dark truths amid the lies
that bury us on the eastern plain
barren our kabuki died in vain
with our child a vapid stain