tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38505481.post8416181549842702298..comments2024-03-07T04:18:20.184-06:00Comments on Poets Who Blog: Third Lend a Line Poemwriterwomanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38505481.post-12561104555851520522008-09-16T21:41:00.000-05:002008-09-16T21:41:00.000-05:00Lovely.I so love the last 2 lines.Lovely.<BR/><BR/>I so love the last 2 lines.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38505481.post-47110877953710077032008-09-13T04:18:00.000-05:002008-09-13T04:18:00.000-05:00this poem moves with tremendous energy through the...this poem moves with tremendous energy through the build up of tension, the rush of conflict, the price to be paid and finally, thankfully, survival despite the wounding ...<BR/><BR/>there are so many beautiful images here ... and i adore how you've paced this towards that closing line .... slowing it all down as chaos fades ...<BR/><BR/>makes the reader feel s/he too weathered the storm, thankful to be alive ...<BR/><BR/>lovely writing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38505481.post-74567267769633142592008-09-12T16:48:00.000-05:002008-09-12T16:48:00.000-05:00Wow what a great poem! As the storm is bearing dow...Wow what a great poem! As the storm is bearing down on the gulf states, this piece makes me want to take a minute and pray for those at risk. <BR/> Some times A couple of feral cats will fight late at night under my house. The wailing is so eerie and haunting. In my mind I can relate that to the wind of a powerful storm as it begins to hit the coast. I love the phrase "Whirlwind of chaos". It is so much like a storm, and a catfight.<BR/> Fantastic poem Raven !!!<BR/> Emiliopunatikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16112194189316655801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38505481.post-86336841950422460192008-09-12T13:43:00.000-05:002008-09-12T13:43:00.000-05:00Wow, that poem is amazingly powerful. It really ma...Wow, that poem is amazingly powerful. It really makes me aches for the Katrina victims and feel the devastation all over again.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com